Dear father,
Last day , I got your letter and become very happy to know that you have posted my pocket money .But I want some extra pocket money because the fee is increase. And for next class I want my books too and you know the books are also costly . And I have to gave rent charge also. So,please send some extra money . And how are you ? Are you fine or not ?Please convey my best compliments to dear mother and my love to youngers.
your loving child
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Thank You!