Experts please tell my mistakes in dairy entery given in the picture.And please tell me what I have to write in it to make it better.
Please answer fast

Experts please tell my mistakes in dairy entery given in the picture.And please tell me what I have to write in it to make it better. Please answer fast •rot" 41

Dear Student,
Please note that the image that you have posted is not clear. However, given below are same changes that you have to make.
  • Saturday, 23 September 2017
  • Time: 2:40 p.m
  • Dear Diary
  • (The body of the entry is not legible)
  • Name

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there are no mistakes
 
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you didn't wrote dear diary and also after date you have to leave a line
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