Experts please tell my mistakes in formal letter given in the picture.And please tell me what I have to write in it to make it better.
Please answer fast
Dear student, the corrections are as follows:
- Write the date without using short forms: 23 September, 2017.
- on behalf of my class
- You are requested to get it repaired. (You cannot ask the Principal to repair it.)
- benches
- plaster is falling off the walls
- fungus growing on the damp walls gives out a foul smell
- in the classroom
- Yours sincerely
- Write the date without using short forms: 23 September, 2017.
- on behalf of my class
- You are requested to get it repaired. (You cannot ask the Principal to repair it.)
- benches
- plaster is falling off the walls
- fungus growing on the damp walls gives out a foul smell
- in the classroom
- Yours sincerely
