I have made a debate on smart phones have rather enslaved the public today , PLEASE CHECK IT AND SAY

 It is true that the introduction and use of smart phones have made the public enslaved. We Are more dependent to our smar tphones. Most of the people have become addicted to smart phones. The first activity in the morning Is to take a look at the phone, before starting the day. More and more people are losing themselves to the virtual world, spending hours and hours on social media and web chats. Walking on a street, 90 percent of people will have their eyes glued to their phone rather than enjoying their surroundings. Social interaction has become a key problem in today’s society
. There is a difference between utilising technology to create efficiencies or using it to dissolve human Interactions. Once it gives a sound or a vibration, we are pulled to reach for the phone, no matter whether we are cooking, eating, watching TV, driving a car, riding a bicycle, walking across the street or talking to someone. The sad truth has become that we are slaves to our smartphones . Smartphones, as the name suggests, are smart and tend to make the user a fool .Technology, like any other aspect, has its own advantages and disadvantages. Technology has had a dramatic positive impact on society by improving agriculture, transportation, communication and other things; but somewhere along the line with the creation of the smart phone, this generation has become so addicted to its use and social media, that people forget what technology was truly made for. Smartphones have created a negative impact on the social interaction of our lives. Most youngsters and children are addicted to this for various reasons. The features provided in the phone often cause the children to be glued to this electronic gadget. However, the continuous use of such devices can cause mental and physical health problems. But, it is unfortunate that the public, especially the youth today use these for the wrong purposes. You need to set your priorities straight. If you do, then you wouldn’t be enslaved to anything.

 

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Not dependent 'to'
It will be dependent upon or on.
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Line three last part
Losing into or in instead of 'to'
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Walking 'in' street.
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Reach 'to' not 'for'
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Not slaves to
It is slaves of.
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thank you so much
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ur topic is good
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Ideas and words you used are good.
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Anything if you use in limit becomes best but when limit is over then it becomes worst. That is what with smartphones. Smartphones are good if used in wise manner and they become worst when they are used in an unfair way.
These can be included in starting.
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its good
 
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