Please answer fast. Thanks a lot... 

Dear Prasad,

What a commendable piece of writing!! A wonderful attempt, indeed. Though, the speech is perfectly fine, but there are a bit of changes that I would suggest from my point of view.

1. Consider changing the sentence "It is a hobby which makes living interesting" to 'Hobby makes our lives interesting'.
2. Also, consider replacing "practiced" and "practicing" (towards the end of the speech) with "practised" and "practising".

Would love to hear back from you!

Regards