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Please check my dairy entry

Dear student,

The student Ishika Gupta has corrected the grammatical mistakes in your writing piece and posted the answer above.
Some more suggestions are:
- Put a comma after Dear Diary.
- Sign off at the end with 'See you later!'
- Record your feelings and emotions in a diary entry: elated, excited, thrilled, etc.
- Please divide the diary entry into paragraphs.

Regards

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Correction is bold and underlined, reasons are in brackets. Also take notice of blanks:

Summer vacations (are mostly more than one day so it should be in plural form) are the days( 'summer vacations' should be plural so will be the 'days') in which we spend our time with our families, visit new places and do lots of activities (rather than 'work', I would prefer 'activities'). I had gone to my cousin ( spelling error) brother and sister's (apostrophe is must when talking about belongings or possessions) house and I had joined the painting classes and I have learned ___ ('how' will not be here) to draw 3D paintings. We had (talking about past, the past tense will also be there) also planned a trip to Ladakh (proper noun starts with capital letter) and I loved the weather (spelling error) of that place. Now, I feel completely rejunevated. I am (in place of 'have', it should be 'am') eager to meet with our friends and teachers.
 
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but why should we check this?
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