Please check my letter experts.Write a letter to your friend about your feelings on being drenched in a heavy rain while playing in the park in hot summer afternoon.......
Dear student,
Many words get blurred when the image is enlarged. Some of the corrections are. :
- The opening sentence needs revision: Hope you are healthy and safe. How did you fare on your term examinations? I did rather well. (Your opening sentence is unclear: 'as it leaves me here'.)
- Introduce the purpose of writing the letter in the first paragraph briefly.
- Used as the subject: my friends and I (not I and my friends)
- Spelling: weather
- Comma to separate clauses
- Do not repeat 'and' over and over again in the same sentence: make separate sentences.
- Consistent use of tense please: use past tense.
- those wet clothes
- was getting bored standing over there
- Divide the body into shorter paragraphs.
Regards
Many words get blurred when the image is enlarged. Some of the corrections are. :
- The opening sentence needs revision: Hope you are healthy and safe. How did you fare on your term examinations? I did rather well. (Your opening sentence is unclear: 'as it leaves me here'.)
- Introduce the purpose of writing the letter in the first paragraph briefly.
- Used as the subject: my friends and I (not I and my friends)
- Spelling: weather
- Comma to separate clauses
- Do not repeat 'and' over and over again in the same sentence: make separate sentences.
- Consistent use of tense please: use past tense.
- those wet clothes
- was getting bored standing over there
- Divide the body into shorter paragraphs.
Regards