Please check my reoprt writing with my following question,
Q- Suppose you are Varun Ahuja, the Staff Correspondent of 'The Bhaskar'. You have been asked to cover an accident in which a young women was run over by a Metro train at Rajiv Chowk Metro Station. Write your report in about 200 words, inventing all the necessary details.
Ans:
Young Women run overed by a Metro train
Varun Ahuja,
Staff Correspondent
Rajiv Chowk, 8th Febuary
A young women was run overed by a Metro tran at Rajiv Ckowk Metro statio yesterday. This incident happened around 4'o clock. The girl's dead body had identified by her parents. The girl's name was Sunidhi and was a MCA student. She was about 21 years old. Acoording to the police, the girl's body had been cut down into 8 peices. Aakansha Negi, who was the at the time of accident, told the police that the girl was listening music on her mobile phone. The girl did not saw the train coming at the station. Suddenly, her foot slipped and she fell down on the track and the train arrived and passes through her body.The people nearby informed the police. The police came in 10 minutes and immediately started the investigation.
Here is your report with a few corrections:
A young women was run overed by a Metro train at Rajiv Ckowk Metro station yesterday. This incident happened around 4'o clock. The girl's dead body was identified by her parents. The girl's name was Sunidhi and was a MCA student. She was about 21 years old. Her dead body as found by the police was severely disfigured. Aakansha Negi, who was the at the time of accident, told the police that the girl was listening to music on her mobile phone. The girl did not see the train arriving at the station. Suddenly, her foot slipped and she fell on the tracks. The accident took place in a fraction of a second. The people nearby informed the police. The police came in 10 minutes and immediately started the investigation.