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Once upon a time a wood-cutter was cutting the tree.By chance,his axe fell into the water.He sat under the tree and started weeping.The god mercury heared his weeping and came out from the water and asked the wood- cutter that why are you weeping?The wood-cutter told him the whole story. The god mercury dived into the water.After sometime,he brought an golden axe and asked " is it your axe?" The wood-cutter said" no".The god mercurydived into the water and brought an silver axe and asked "is it yours?"The wood-cutter again replied "no".This time god mercury brought an iron axe and asked "is it yours?"The wood-cutter said "yes".He becamevery happy.The god mercury was impressed because of his honesty and gave all three axes to the wood-cutter as a reward.

MORAL- "HONESTY IS THE POLICY"

there are a fewmistakes...just check it. mistakes written in brackets

Once upon a time a wood-cutter was cutting the ( it should be 'a' not 'the') tree.By chance (i think it should be 'by mistake not 'by chance'),his axe fell into the water.He sat under the tree and started weeping.The (not 'the god mercury' only 'god mercury') god mercury heared ( 'heared' is wrong. it should be 'heard') his weeping and came out from(not 'came out from' ,it should be 'came out of')the water and asked the wood- cutter that why are you weeping?('asked the wood cutter why are you weeping' is wrong it should be:' asked the wood cutter why he was weeping')The wood-cutter told him the whole story. The god mercury

(not 'the god mercury' only 'god mercury')

dived into the water.After sometime,he brought an ( 'a' not 'an') golden axe and asked " is it your axe?" The wood-cutter said" no".The god mercury

(not 'the god mercury' only 'god mercury')

dived into the water and brought an silver axe and asked "is it yours?"The wood-cutter again replied ('replied again' not' again replied')"no".This time god mercury brought an iron axe and asked "is it yours?"The wood-cutter said "yes".He became very happy.The god mercury

(not 'the god mercury' only 'god mercury')

was impressed because of his honesty and gave all three axes to the wood-cutter as a reward.

MORAL- "HONESTY IS THE POLICY" (official moral is " HONESTY IS THE BEST POLICY")

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yes there are a few mistakes but bharath has corrected it
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great work@Bharath
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Once upon a time there was a woodcutter cutting the trees. By mistake his Axe fell into the water.
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There are a few mistakes which will be corrected in BOLD!-
Once upon a time, a wood-cutter was cutting the tree. By mistake,his axe fell into the water. He sat under the tree and started weeping.The god mercury heard his weeping and came out from the water and asked the wood-cutter that why are you weeping? The wood-cutter told him the whole story. The god mercury dived into the water. After sometime, he brought an golden axe and asked " Is this your axe?" The wood-cutter said " No".The god mercury dived into the water and brought a silver axe and asked "Is this yours?"The wood-cutter again replied "No.".This time, the god mercury brought an iron axe and asked "Is this yours?" The wood-cutter said "Yes!". The woodcutter became very happy.The god mercury was impressed with his honesty and gave all three axes to the wood-cutter as a reward.

 

MORAL- "HONESTY IS THE POLICY"
Moral should be "HONESTY IS THE BEST POLICY.".

These are all the mistakes that need correcting and some few suggestions. 
Hope this helped,
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