Please check the essay
Dear Student,
Such questions are made for enhancing the self creative skills and should be tried
answering on your own. You have included appropriate points in your essay. I can see you have included following points :-
1. Education improves employment prospects of individuals.
2. It is essential for being successful in life and achieving our goals.
3. It improves us mentally, technologically and socially.
4. The government has introduced numerous programmes for promoting education.
I am pointing out certain errors committed by you : line 2, replace the education with education 3. life. For 4,5. (Rephrase sentence as ) Higher education has become important for getting jobs 6. (Rephrase sentence as ) Education creates opportunities 7. mentally and socially strong 8. play - plays. Also, check the second para.
You can also incorporate the following points :
- Education is the process of learning about various things to gain knowledge and acquire skills.
- It is essential for the economic, technological and social progress of a nation; and physical, mental and financial progress of its citizen.
- Nelson Mandela once said, " Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. "
- It is the panacea for tackling with social problems of poverty, gender divide, racism, casteism, pollution etc.
- The Indian government has introduced 'Right to Education' as a Fundamental Right for providing education to all from the age group 6 to 14.
-Education changes lives, societies, countries and generations.
​Regards,
Such questions are made for enhancing the self creative skills and should be tried
answering on your own. You have included appropriate points in your essay. I can see you have included following points :-
1. Education improves employment prospects of individuals.
2. It is essential for being successful in life and achieving our goals.
3. It improves us mentally, technologically and socially.
4. The government has introduced numerous programmes for promoting education.
I am pointing out certain errors committed by you : line 2, replace the education with education 3. life. For 4,5. (Rephrase sentence as ) Higher education has become important for getting jobs 6. (Rephrase sentence as ) Education creates opportunities 7. mentally and socially strong 8. play - plays. Also, check the second para.
You can also incorporate the following points :
- Education is the process of learning about various things to gain knowledge and acquire skills.
- It is essential for the economic, technological and social progress of a nation; and physical, mental and financial progress of its citizen.
- Nelson Mandela once said, " Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world. "
- It is the panacea for tackling with social problems of poverty, gender divide, racism, casteism, pollution etc.
- The Indian government has introduced 'Right to Education' as a Fundamental Right for providing education to all from the age group 6 to 14.
-Education changes lives, societies, countries and generations.
​Regards,