please check this answer from the tiger king ....

 

Dear Student.

Here are the errors in your answer:

• The author of the story has commented...
• It should be "human greed and selfishness."
• "It can be seen that human beings think about themselves only." 
• It should be "They exploit animals and kill them..."
• "The author forces us to think..."
• It should be "shareholders of..."

We hope that that this answer solves your query.
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