Please check this article writing.
Write an article for your school magazine on the increasing competition in academics which is exerting a lot of pressure on youngsters today.

Hints:-(no time to play, rote memory, burden of homework, stiff competition, parental pressure to perform well, their hopes & aspirations.

Dear Student,

It is a well attempted article with the correct format.
Please note the following points for improvement:
  • The number of paragraphs should ideally be, not more than 4 and each of them should be self explanatory and not just an extension of the prior content.
  • The ending note of an article should either include solutions, suggestions or some conclusion.
  • Attention should be paid to proper grammar and relevant and precise content.
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Your letter is completely alright ,but just pay a little attention to grammar. Have a good day : )
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