please check this invitation letter

Dear Student, 

Your answer is almost perfect. Please make the following minor changes:
  • my elder sister, Anne Flair, will be ( instead of my elder sister Anne Flair will)
  • line 4 - Hotel Lake View, Udaipur ( instead of Hotel Lake View, Udaipur)

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It is very correct
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You have written nicely with a excellent format
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