Please check this letter writing.
WRITE A LETTER TO THE POSTMASTER COMPLAINING HIM FOR YOUR DELAY IN DELIVERY OF LETTER AND A POSTAL ARTICLE.
Dear Student,
The format as well as the content are correct, however, please note the following points regarding the letter you have framed:
1. While writing receiver's address, the word 'To' should not be used.
2. The receiver shouldn't be addresses as 'Dear Sir', because he is an official and not known to you. Simply 'Sir' would suffice.
3. The opening line of the letter could be, 'It is to bring to your kind notice that..'.
4. A few grammatical mistakes: at 3 pm had not reached; has been 8 days; parcel of medicines has not reached
Regards
The format as well as the content are correct, however, please note the following points regarding the letter you have framed:
1. While writing receiver's address, the word 'To' should not be used.
2. The receiver shouldn't be addresses as 'Dear Sir', because he is an official and not known to you. Simply 'Sir' would suffice.
3. The opening line of the letter could be, 'It is to bring to your kind notice that..'.
4. A few grammatical mistakes: at 3 pm had not reached; has been 8 days; parcel of medicines has not reached
Regards