Please check this message writing.You live as a paying guest in your cousin's house.You receive a call from your father to inform your cousin about the heart operation of your uncle.The date has been fixed for 30 March,2017 and you have to reach the hospital as soon as possible.Write a message to your cousin about the operation.

Dear student,

You can frame the first sentence as :

My father had called to inform me about my uncle's heart operation. 

The rest of the message is correct.

Regards
 

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Dear Mate,
1. The beginning should be :- My father has called... (Add 'has')
2. And your remaining part does seem correct.

Hope this helped you :)
Regards.
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