Q- You are Suresh and you have invited your friend Sitesh to visit you in Delhi during summer vacation. He has promised to visit you and spend the vacation with you. Write an e-mail to him about how you want to spend the vacation in 120 words.
Date: 26th March 2014
From: suresh99dlt@yahoo.in
To: sitesh21znc@gmail.com
Subject: How we will spend the summer vacation
Dear Sitesh ,
Hi! How are you? As we recently decided to spend this summer vacation together, I want to let you know about how will spend this vacation.
First we will visit the Red fort, a day after you will come. After a week, we will visit the Lotus temple. After two-three days, we will visit Akshardham temple. After five-six days, we will visit Qutub Minar and within a week after we will visit Qutub Minar, we will also visit Adventure Island, one of your favourite places in Delhi. Two weeks after that, we will also visit Water Park.
How do you like my idea? Im waiting for the vacations to come and then you and me will enjoy this all. I will soon be writing another e-mail for you. Till then, take care!
Love
Suresh
The format is correct. The given answer(email) has the same idea repeated in different sentences.Instead, one sentence could have covered the places you want to visit with your friend:. The other sentences should talk of various other things you can do with your friend. For example:
We will visit Red Fort, Lotus Temple, Qutub Minar, Adventure Island. These are my favourite places in Delhi and I want you to enjoy them as much as I do. I will also take you to Dilli Haat to show you the various stalls put up by different states to display their arts and craft. We will surely visit malls and shop for clothes and games. My mother will bake us her famous chocolate cake and father will teach us how to make a toy windmill. We can do our holiday projects together after spending a day in the Science Museum. I have planned so many things and now I am just waiting for you to come over in the holidays.