???????????????? :
The traffic police department is observing a road safety week it has asked each school to send 40 students to participate in road safety week on 10th November 2012 . The principal of New Era School, Noida has asked the head boy of the school Sameer Kapoor to put up a notice asking each house captain to send 10 names .Write a notice in not more than 50 words on behalf of the head boy.

This the notice...... Please check it experts...


Overall the notice is fine.

However, you can work upon the language and make some modifications.

Few suggestions:

Instead of 'school  principle', you could have written 'respected principal'.
Also, the word principal is not spelt correctly.
'House' need not start with a capital H.  

  • 0
What are you looking for?