You are Balraj/Bala from Ferozabad, Gujarat and you live near the landfill site. The growing unsanitary conditions are causing multiple diseases and inconvenience due to poor hygiene to the residents. It has also resulted in illnesses and rising fatalities in your colony. Write a letter to the Municipal Commissioner requesting him/her to organize a cleanliness drive.
Dear Student.
Here are the errors in your answer:
Regards.
Here are the errors in your answer:
- Try to write the full sender's address.
- Do not write "dear" in a formal letter.
- It should be: "people of Firozabad have suffered a lot."
- "Resident's lives were made more difficult...."
- Try to avoid writing "Firozabad landfill site" again and again. You can use pronouns.
- "Yours faithfully" should be on the left side.
Regards.